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reflection

We ere given three tasks; a restraint review, life in the day and creative writing. for each task we had to annotate a style model or find our own style model to annotate. We also had to write a detailed plan for each explaining our structure and our linguistic methods we would use.

The restaurant review was related back to a style model of Jamie Oliver's magazine which was very biast becuase it was writtern by his best friend. I encorperated my lexical choices on my style model by using superlatives and exaggerated postive commnets about my resturant i reviewed. I liked this task because it was personal to an expirence you had done and you would write your honest comments about it. 

For life in the day i chose to write about my sister as an ispiration with her job in london and how she copes with every day decistions and routines. I felt like i really had the 'voice' of my sister and a clear audience and purpose for my piece of writing. I really enjoyed this task and would choose to do this for my final coursework task.

Creative writing was tough for me. we had to write a short story based on a style model we chose. I chose to use a ghost story based on a little girl and her school and home life. I didnt feel inspired from my style model and would choose a different short story if i had to elaberate on creative writing again.